Welcome to "As the Umbra Turns"

This is page 9 of a 9 page remake of an older 7 page piece. both versions were written, laid out, drawn and inked by me though based on the world of whitewolf.

NO, it does NOT make sense. i know this.
So why am i posting it?

I'm posting up both versions so how much improvement I have made in skill can be seen.

The original piece (starting here [link] ) was done circa 1997/98. the remake was done about 5 years later though it wasn't finished until about 2 years ago.

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This is the last page of the set. Originally, the old version (this is a remake like i said) had only 7 pages, but when i redrew it, i fixed the timing.

this page actually presented me with alot of problems. i drew it 3 times before coming up with something i was happy with.