Akane - What a Mess

Because of the recent story i wrote "Plausible Deniability"
Plausible Deniability Part 1 - Ryoga Hibiki Plausible Deniability
Part 1: Ryoga Hibiki

Ryoga Hibiki walked down the road like a man with a purpose. Striding forward with long, sure steps, his gaze fixed on the horizon. Unless you looked really close, you wouldn't know that the road was passing unseen before him, and that he was in turmoil.

Ryoga was thinking, and thinking hard, about him and Akane. Did they – could they – have a future together? As much as he professed his love for her, he had to wonder: in the corners of his mind, deep down in his soul, did he really feel the love that he professed?  Was his inability to act upon his feelings due to shyness
I was inspired to do some Ranma 1/2 art - i have quite a few ideas in my head, but this is the second one i got out and i'm rather happy with it actually. This scene is from Part 3 of the story, when Akane thinks about the mess she's made.

Something about both of the Ranma's do throw me off - and i think its MOSTLY the angle of the boy half Ranma. i should have angled him more downward in that little spiral, and i think that would have fixed MOST of the problems with the Ranmas....